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​WRITE  A  STORY  WHICH  STARTS  WITH  THE  OPENING  OF  A  DOOR  TO  A  ROOM  THAT  YOU  ARE  NOT  SUPPOSED  TO  ENTER

2/7/2018

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By Yashica
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The  door’s hinges  creaked  and  shrieked and  the  sound  resounded  in  my  mind  as  my  face was  hit  with  a  glacial  blast  of  icy  air that  carried  the metallic  scent  of  blood.
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The long  hallway  seemed  to  stretch  on  forever  I  took  discreet  minuscule steps cutting  through  the  onyx  like  darkness. At  the  end  of  the  corridor  lay  a  simple  wooden  door. No, on  second  thought, the  door  actually  appeared  to  be  made  of  scintillating silver  and  was  cool  to touch. My  quivering  fingers  touched  the  door,  a  feather  like  touch. Although  my  touch  was   light,  the  coldness  of  the  door  sent  shivers  through  my  veins  and  despite t he  unusually  low  temperature  in the  rooms, perspiration  trickled  down  my  back  like  warm  soup.
~Flashback~
The  door  swung  open  and  as  I  stepped  through,  my  consciousness  faded. “ Will  you  be here  tomorrow ?”  asked  my  best  comrade  as  she swung  her  legs  backwards  and  forwards  incessantly, in  hopes  of  gaining  a  higher and  higher altitude.  Her  short  limbs  flailed  and  she looked rather  frivolous  as  she  bellowed  non sensical  words  in  apparent  elevation.  I  grinned  back  at  her and  said , “ I  can’t , some of  us  have  to  study.” My  tone  was mocking but  my words  were  not.  All  I  could  think  about  was  her  being  the  perfect  kid, the  goody-two shoes  of  the  playground. Not only  was  she  Ms.Brainy but  she  was  also  alluring  with  blond ringlets  and  clear  glassy blue  eyes.  She  huffed  as  she  came  darting  to  me  kicking up  copious  mountains  of sand.  Her  eyes  were questioning  as  I  commenced  a  conversation  that  had  something  to  do with  her  being  the perfect  child.  As  she  bent  down  to tie  her  shoe lace , I  picked  out  a  short, incandescent  ivory  knife  from  the  wide  array  that  I  had  inside  the  denim jacket  and  enshrouded  it  behind  my  back.
Her  trusting  eyes  bore  into  mine  as  I  brought  the  knife  in  a  silvery  arc  and  then  blood  red  bloomed  like  a flower  on  her  little  white  dress.
~Flashback ends~
I  awoke  in the  pallid  grey  light  of  the  hospital  and  an  unsurpassable  pang  of  pain  shot  through  my  neck.  Then, as  if , my  limbs  had  a wall, I  began  trotting  towards  the  door,  my attempts  to  stop  walking  proved  fruitless.
“How many  times ?” I  questioned
“Until  you  learn  to  swallow your  insecurity ?”  they said.
Then  I  continued  my  incessant path  as  the light  left   and  the  darkness  enveloped  me and  spasms  of  guilt  raced  through  my  mind.
14 Comments
Ayushi Chauhan
25/8/2020 11:13:36 am

Thanks for writing this story
😍😍😍😄😄😄

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Varsha
8/10/2020 03:28:10 pm

Wowwww

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natalie
17/5/2021 10:55:24 am

hi

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Kiloshah
24/6/2021 05:56:47 pm

Nice one

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MMM
8/8/2021 05:45:12 pm

thanks for writing the story

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Kelley
17/8/2021 02:55:11 pm

that was great

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Ayaan link
12/9/2021 06:24:24 pm

Fuck u

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aboodi
7/2/2023 10:38:43 pm

fuck you

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ayyans brother link
28/9/2021 02:25:43 pm

Fuck you toooooooo

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Mohammad Alzyoud
31/10/2021 06:48:55 pm

Really good example of what a good of what a story should start like

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donovan
8/11/2021 10:21:50 am

i was in an online exam when i google searched this title...

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nain
22/2/2022 10:02:29 pm

wooooow

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Alexaine
18/6/2022 02:21:48 am

Nice story but u are meant to start with the topic

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Ashirkhan link
7/11/2022 08:38:31 pm

Sexy

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